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Perfect as is, but I also imagine this: Just before the vessel begins its plunge, three rat-like creatures jump ship and throw themselves into the sea. Appears to be Ivanka, Jared and Don Jr. A shark nicknamed Desantis gobbles them up.

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A good revised scene.

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great, but whatcha got against Eric? surely he can't be the sole survivor...I was looking for a good pun sorta thing using "The Expressway To Your Heart," but it sorta got away from me.

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Eric wasnтАЩt invited on the boat.

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